What Happened to the Drop?!
At first i was like alright this has some potential, but then the first drop i was like WTH? the drop was so weak i almost didnt even notice it was there. Your melody is nice and fresh, but the drop was so tiny you might as well not even had one. Fix the drop and add some more bass that i can feel. The bass aint bad its just as weak as the drop. fix these and this would be an amazing track. Sorry dont mean to be so negative but i tell you this so you can improve and make better music. hope this helps.